Unknown name...

Fri, Jul 12, 2013 at 3:37 PM By: pandemonium23

Here is a poem I just wrote, I don't have a name for it, because I can't think of one that is good enough...:) So, if you guys have any ideas, I would love to know, and I hope you enjoy this poem! Lately I have been feeling depressed and angry because of several things that are happening in my life, so I decided to write this for two reasons...One: Putting my emotions in a work of art helps me to deal with them, and two: It helps me to realize that I shouldn't feel so bad because I have love, and happiness all around me. I really hope you like it! Bye!

It's all noise.
My blank stare
Penetrates through
The static,
Through the chaos,
I seem emotionless,
But underneath I am

There are two faces
To this fire, there is
Love and Hate..

Hate chars my heart,
And the smoke
Suffocates me, tears fall,
Trying to put out
The flames, but it only
Leaves it a burning ember,
Making it possible for it
To grow again...

With Love, the fire warms
My cold limbs, and it glows
Bright in the dark, giving
Me light so I don't get lost,
It melts away the sadness
And anger, like it is only snow,
And my soul flickers and
Dances like the flames,
My eyes are no longer lifeless,
They shine, my smile is no
Longer fake, it grows like
The fire, when I have love,
It is as if all the burnt skin
From hate heals, and I am
Reborn into serenity...

If only it could last...

  1. SAFLove avatar

    On Wed, Aug 28, 2013 at 11:50 PM, SAFLove said:

    emotions unseen in my countenance

  2. Sensitive avatar

    On Sun, Jul 14, 2013 at 9:03 AM, Sensitive said:

    beautiful, congratulations! It's very strong and emotional!;)

  3. Faust avatar

    On Sun, Jul 14, 2013 at 8:41 AM, Faust said:

    Balance of Duality is a suiting name for this I think

  4. jayjay avatar

    On Sat, Jul 13, 2013 at 1:14 PM, jayjay said:

    I wish I could write stuff like that, To go with me when I am playing my guitar! I find it hard to do some thing like that, May be a name for it could be "The fighting phoenix". Its what come to my head any way. Hope you feel better soon, It has been a while now since I have heard from you, Stay positive,& Safe YEH.JJ.

  5. Trip avatar

    On Sat, Jul 13, 2013 at 11:33 AM, Trip said:

    Id say leave the name of the poem blank if u couldnt come up with a name for it, its just not meant to be there

  6. Twisted Transistor avatar

    On Sat, Jul 13, 2013 at 8:33 AM, Twisted Transistor said:

    You cease to amaze me, the way you express yourself in your writing, never leaving words untied, each compliments the other, leaving no room for confusion. :)

  7. Silent Metal avatar

    On Fri, Jul 12, 2013 at 8:27 PM, Silent Metal said:

    Wow, that is hauntingly beautiful

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