The best I can give you!

Fri, Jun 14, 2013 at 1:50 PM By: pandemonium23

This is the best I have got right now, I hope you like it, it isn't my best work, but I get out of a writers block, you must write...right? :D

Play with the Puppet Deranged

They want to change me…
They want to break me…
So they can hurriedly take the pieces
And repair me…

But..I don’t think I am broken,
I have even cut myself open,
And pulled out my heart for my eyes to see
It had an irregular beat…
But that is why it is perfect for me…

So why do they lie?
Tell me I am not right,
They hurt me with their spite.

I look in the mirror and see a beast,
I am made of others pieces,
A patchwork of humanity…

I am going insane
With the noise constantly bombarding my brain!
Are they even aware of my pain?

I am no longer human,
Only a puppet deranged…
A smile is constantly plastered on my face,
And I hold back the tears until I am safe.

Now I feel nothing,
My eyes have gone blank,
I can’t remember why I am even here in the first place…

I am a toy now,
But I guess that’s okay,
I like to play…
But not their way!

I am tired of their twisted game,
I am starting to fall apart,
But that is a good thing,
Because then they will throw me away

I’d rather be rotten and decayed,
Then torn to pieces every single day
Wouldn’t you?

  1. SAFLove avatar

    On Wed, Aug 28, 2013 at 8:36 PM, SAFLove said:

    this is deep i am in love with your deepness..the heart expressing such pain..i truly am here for ye

  2. Trip avatar

    On Sun, Jun 16, 2013 at 3:32 PM, Trip said:

    Love it your great at what you do

  3. jayjay avatar

    On Sat, Jun 15, 2013 at 7:10 AM, jayjay said:

    It amazes me how you write this kind of stuff, Very dark and made me a little sad, But hey, There only words, Great at that.=)

  4. Silent Metal avatar

    On Fri, Jun 14, 2013 at 5:56 PM, Silent Metal said:

    Great poem pandemonium. Heavy message, well written and creative.

  5. Twisted Transistor avatar

    On Fri, Jun 14, 2013 at 5:18 PM, Twisted Transistor said:

    Amazing! I am speechless picture that! Although, not to speehless to say I feel when we do not expect others to understand us, thats when it really does not matter. For me, the music due, music do, understands me. :)

  6. Faust avatar

    On Fri, Jun 14, 2013 at 3:01 PM, Faust said:

    There are always going to be people who just straight up do not understand you.
    Just keep on being yourself.

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