1. Silent Metal avatar

    On Mon, May 27, 2013 at 12:59 AM, Silent Metal said:

    very nice and emotional, i like the final part, it's much more optomistic, the middle was really moving and sorrowful, great poem

  2. jayjay avatar

    On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 2:58 PM, jayjay said:

    That was touching, I can see why your mum cried! A SHINNING LIGHT YOU ARE.=)

  3. Figure09 avatar

    On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 12:34 PM, Figure09 said:

    i like that!

  4. mlukec avatar

    On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 11:34 AM, mlukec said:

    This song make me think of situations like this. If you like dnb.


  5. mlukec avatar

    On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 10:12 AM, mlukec said:

    Yes, one of your best!!!

    Glue, tape, stiches, our hearts. We can give everything to try and help someone else, but, in the end, it is their decision. That song is incredible. I had not heard them before.

    I would be water or air
    Anything to get you there
    I would be silent or scream
    Anything to help you dream
    But you didn't want to breathe
    And you didn't want to drink
    You didn't want to listen
    So now we barely speak

    Those last two stanzas are awesome. You made them so hopeful, so determined. Yay!!