On Mon, May 27, 2013 at 12:59 AM,
very nice and emotional, i like the final part, it's much more optomistic, the middle was really moving and sorrowful, great poem
On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 2:58 PM,
That was touching, I can see why your mum cried! A SHINNING LIGHT YOU ARE.=)
On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 12:34 PM,
i like that!
On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 11:34 AM,
This song make me think of situations like this. If you like dnb.
On Sun, May 26, 2013 at 10:12 AM,
Yes, one of your best!!!
Glue, tape, stiches, our hearts. We can give everything to try and help someone else, but, in the end, it is their decision. That song is incredible. I had not heard them before.
I would be water or air
Anything to get you there
I would be silent or scream
Anything to help you dream
But you didn't want to breathe
And you didn't want to drink
You didn't want to listen
So now we barely speak
Those last two stanzas are awesome. You made them so hopeful, so determined. Yay!!