On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 9:39 AM,
Just pick up your guitar,(if you can play one, & if you got one) And away you go. Did you realy write that??? DEEP.=(
On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 7:47 AM,
That is some deep stuff, and like mlukec said, the first and last lines really stand out.
On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 5:01 PM,
The emotion conveyed and the repeated lines in the first and last stanzas give the poem strength. Very deep. I would almost take something away from the middle to streamline it. It is a good poem; I apologize if I was more critical than you wanted.
On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 4:55 PM,
It is nice. It made me think of Christian Grey, if Ana left him.
On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 9:42 PM,
Wow. That is deep. Did you lose someone reccently?