A GIRL WHO LOST HER WAY. ))))) / I wort this three years ago JUST A ROUGH COPY

Wed, Nov 21, 2012 at 11:10 PM By: fearisaplacetolive30

My best friend Gloria was not always messed up and crazy,infact she was the party fun girl of the group. Gloria had a personality so viberant and lively, her sense of humor was like fire works always had us on our toe's with a smile so big it lit up the room. She was such a great person and friend. Gloria had her life in order and goals she already had going and other goals she wanted to achieve.
Gloria, Shelly, Cindy and Sarah. Four best friend's always together rarely apart. One year later the four of us moved in together, it was a very old house built in 1810, very interesting and odd looking. On the outside of the house has blood red bricks with a gold trim around it and with a hint purple. The side looked like we had just enter a different plain or realm, the right house for us because of the history behind the house and built in the 1810.

Six months of living here that's we all notice a change in Gloria, she went from chatty Cathy, to nothing at all,no eating,no talking at all and we new something was different to her appearence and not happy Gloria. None of us knew what had happened to her. Gloria never left her room without putting herslef together and now she has no care in the world.

  1. WR avatar

    On Sat, Mar 30, 2013 at 4:52 AM, WR said:

    You should write a book ;)

  2. Katie Levy avatar

    On Thu, Nov 22, 2012 at 9:09 PM, Katie Levy said:

    hmmm. Nice sounds insanely interesting want more lol

  3. MindFreakOnALeashBlakelyRachelle avatar

    On Thu, Nov 22, 2012 at 12:55 PM, MindFreakOnALeashBlakelyRachelle said:

    i think it could turn out to be a really great story if you just edited a little, and mabee build more of a background story before rushing straight to the problem...

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