On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 5:24 PM,
WOw. I wish I could write like that!!! Gave me goosebumps, why aren't you publishing??? Really great work!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:56 PM,
No one lifts her up
For they fear if they did that then
She would think that they were smaller
And she'd act better than them
So locked away is happiness
Some distance from her heart
They want her to depend on them
And not to drift apart
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:52 PM,
I really like the way u write. Maybe u could give it ahappy ending with a lesson learned feel. Then publish it as a childrens book. That would kind of ROCK!'
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 8:05 PM,
I love this!! It's so amazing!! Keep writing Shaw!!! :D
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 7:50 PM,
I think this was the best blog you have done, and perfect song for today :). no matter what never stop writing
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM,
Wonderful .. more! MORE!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM,
you never cease to amaze me with your blogs! Love it
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:24 PM,
I like it when a story captures your attention. Now I'm intrigued as to what happens next. Good story Shaw!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:16 PM,
That is such a sad story.
I am under 13 years of age.
I am at least 13 years of age.