1. d1rtytr@sh avatar

    On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 5:24 PM, d1rtytr@sh said:

    WOw. I wish I could write like that!!! Gave me goosebumps, why aren't you publishing??? Really great work!!!

  2. Tammie avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:56 PM, Tammie said:

    No one lifts her up
    For they fear if they did that then
    She would think that they were smaller
    And she'd act better than them

    So locked away is happiness
    Some distance from her heart
    They want her to depend on them
    And not to drift apart
    Favorite part!!!!!!!!

  3. Bene Gesserit avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:52 PM, Bene Gesserit said:

    I really like the way u write. Maybe u could give it ahappy ending with a lesson learned feel. Then publish it as a childrens book. That would kind of ROCK!'

  4. Missinglife avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 8:05 PM, Missinglife said:

    I love this!! It's so amazing!! Keep writing Shaw!!! :D

  5. ghostdancer80000000 avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 7:50 PM, ghostdancer80000000 said:

    I think this was the best blog you have done, and perfect song for today :). no matter what never stop writing

  6. Xusi avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM, Xusi said:

    Wonderful .. more! MORE!!!

  7. BamBam avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM, BamBam said:

    you never cease to amaze me with your blogs! Love it

  8. pfloydmaster avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:24 PM, pfloydmaster said:

    I like it when a story captures your attention. Now I'm intrigued as to what happens next. Good story Shaw!

  9. Sussi avatar

    On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:16 PM, Sussi said:

    That is such a sad story.

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