On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 5:24 PM, d1rtytr@sh said:
WOw. I wish I could write like that!!! Gave me goosebumps, why aren't you publishing??? Really great work!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:56 PM, Tammie said:
No one lifts her up For they fear if they did that then She would think that they were smaller And she'd act better than them So locked away is happiness Some distance from her heart They want her to depend on them And not to drift apart Favorite part!!!!!!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:52 PM, Bene Gesserit said:
I really like the way u write. Maybe u could give it ahappy ending with a lesson learned feel. Then publish it as a childrens book. That would kind of ROCK!'
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 8:05 PM, Missinglife said:
I love this!! It's so amazing!! Keep writing Shaw!!! :D
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 7:50 PM, ghostdancer83 said:
I think this was the best blog you have done, and perfect song for today :). no matter what never stop writing
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM, Xusi said:
Wonderful .. more! MORE!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM, BamBam said:
you never cease to amaze me with your blogs! Love it
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:24 PM, pfloydmaster said:
I like it when a story captures your attention. Now I'm intrigued as to what happens next. Good story Shaw!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:16 PM, Sussi said:
That is such a sad story.
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On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 5:24 PM, d1rtytr@sh said:
WOw. I wish I could write like that!!! Gave me goosebumps, why aren't you publishing??? Really great work!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:56 PM, Tammie said:
No one lifts her up
For they fear if they did that then
She would think that they were smaller
And she'd act better than them
So locked away is happiness
Some distance from her heart
They want her to depend on them
And not to drift apart
Favorite part!!!!!!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 9:52 PM, Bene Gesserit said:
I really like the way u write. Maybe u could give it ahappy ending with a lesson learned feel. Then publish it as a childrens book. That would kind of ROCK!'
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 8:05 PM, Missinglife said:
I love this!! It's so amazing!! Keep writing Shaw!!! :D
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 7:50 PM, ghostdancer83 said:
I think this was the best blog you have done, and perfect song for today :). no matter what never stop writing
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM, Xusi said:
Wonderful .. more! MORE!!!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM, BamBam said:
you never cease to amaze me with your blogs! Love it
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:24 PM, pfloydmaster said:
I like it when a story captures your attention. Now I'm intrigued as to what happens next. Good story Shaw!
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 1:16 PM, Sussi said:
That is such a sad story.