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Where did Sarah go
This is a rough version of a song I have been writing over the last couple of days. Feedback is very much appreciated.
http://www.youtube.com/user/theycantstopmenow
The song is about a freind of mine who's father would duck tape her hands and feet and mouth when he would spank her as a little girl. Then he would put her in a closet for hours. She was only 6 years old when abuse like that started to happen. I eventually lost touch with her after she moved. I changed her name in the song for obvious reasons.
Where did Sarah go
Guess I'll never know
Took away my friend
Loved me till the end
Everything is falling apart
I realize
Its not too late to be afraid of the dark
Tears in my eyes
And I think I'm slowly going insane
I try to run
But I can't escape the source of the pain
Cuz you're the one
You were always there
Now I don't know where
Search for her in vain
Memories remain
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Tape my mouth
You don't want to hear what I say!
Comments
On Wed, Jul 13, 2011 at 11:31 AM, Xusi said:
You have done her justice.
Wherever she is I hope it's better now (X)
On Sun, Jul 10, 2011 at 8:41 AM, rebbie said:
wow, awsome
On Thu, Jul 7, 2011 at 8:59 AM, Chon said:
Kick so much ass, I want to get it.
On Mon, Jul 4, 2011 at 10:42 AM, kornfaerie said:
Really nice song and i agree with all the comments. You can tell you're heavily influenced by Korn. Im just fiercely loyal to Korn and only listen to Korn!
On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 10:19 AM, Shawshank said:
Thanks Knife! Like i said, I'm really limited with just 8 tracks. When I get the final version done, I'll post it on here. I really appreciate all the feedback. I'll put more of my dark stuff on YouTube soon.
On Sat, Jul 2, 2011 at 10:12 AM, KnifeMaster said:
Wow. (all joking aside) this is really fucking awesome. Great voice.
On Wed, Jun 29, 2011 at 4:31 PM, ~ HeMi ~ said:
LoVe It xx
On Wed, Jun 29, 2011 at 1:07 AM, avangardeify said:
It's really a great song, you're very talented!!! The story behind it though is horrible, i'm not a violent person but anyone abusing a child should get what they deserve.
On Tue, Jun 28, 2011 at 7:40 PM, Suzy said:
Omg Thats Terrible How parent did to their child But It Sounded Good :)
On Tue, Jun 28, 2011 at 6:38 PM, Shawshank said:
Your feedback is very much appreciated. I want to make my songs sound the best I can so your comments are very helpful. Thanks for taking the time. I'll keep you all posted :)