I wrote this about a year ago i think, i wrote it when times were really bad and as a way to escape problems and to get out some feelings, (Jonathan Davis is like my idol, i feel i relate to alot of his lyrics :] ), but anyways tell me if its any good? And be brutally honest!!

Look at me now,
all broken down,
i've lost so much that just can not be found,
ive felt this pain for way too long,
you've tore me down,
but look at me now,
im still standing my ground,
you dont see what you've done,
you that it was all just fun,
not me so now im done.
All the hatred you have fed,
all the things you shouldn't have said,
they all think it's in my head,
that i won't be happy until your dead,
they've stabbed me in my back for you,
they like you more then me too.
You talk shit behind my back,
when you don't even know me in fact,
you fucking little bitch,
just leave me alone.