Hopeless Battle

Tue, May 13, 2014 at 7:52 PM By: Kornistik

I just sat here for the last half an hour and wrote a poem on the fly. It's called, as the topic suggests, Hopeless Battle:


Mindless rage, boundless cage
No one's there, stop and stare
Never kind, can't unwind
Made to cry, left to die

Hollow soul, lost control
Knows no fear, shed a tear
Bound by hate, undone fate
Lost to me, wait and see

Gather speed, take the lead
Gone too soon, darkened moon
Crystal eyes, cloudy skies
Falling rain, searing pain

No more hope, cut the rope
Haunting dreams, piercing screams
Nothing left, heartless theft
Count the cost, all is lost



There is more poetry I've written over the years on my website at Drusilla's Lair v3.2

  1. Sara Mad avatar

    On Thu, May 22, 2014 at 10:16 AM, Sara Mad said:

    It's perfect.I was starting to cry while reading!!

  2. ALongWayDown avatar

    On Sat, May 17, 2014 at 3:18 AM, ALongWayDown said:

    That's an awesome poem! Very balanced, it flows.

  3. KandyKorn24 avatar

    On Wed, May 14, 2014 at 12:09 AM, KandyKorn24 said:

    That was profound. I really like poetry like that though! I used to get into poetry about colors and what that color represents. I will have to go to your site and check it out! Good job! Take care, Kandykorn24
    KORNKRAZED not KORNFUZED!

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