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This is War
Blood splattered on the ground.
Screams filling your ears
Hate
For nothing everywhere
Love
Distinguished, no longer in the air.
This is blood
This is hate
This is war
We praise for death
Yet shun our own
When a soldier kills
It's cause for celebration
If you killed
You would be a disgrace to the nation.
This is blood
This is hate
This is war
Makes sense?
I didn't think so
This is blood
This is hate
This is war
No more love in this battle anymore
No more kindness and thought
No evolution
The concept is caught
This is blood
This is hate
This is war.
Live your lives
But this fear
Will take it's toll.
On your life
On your health
On it all
This isn't my best poem ever or anything, but i didnt write something in a while and though i should. So tells me what y'all think about it? Please?
Comments
On Tue, Jul 31, 2012 at 12:35 AM, RUBENRCKS said:
Your poem is not stupid is great deep!!! i wish everybody think as u do!!!! now on the evolutionary stage i am not quiet so sure... but time will come... wars will look primitive
On Fri, Jul 27, 2012 at 10:02 AM, RUBENRCKS said:
WATCH IT LITTLE LADY THE GODS OF WAR ARE COMING.... HAHAHA I LIKE IT!!!! I GUESS THEY WILL NEVER GIVE PEACE A CHANCE.... THAT MIGHT B WHY WE HATE LOVE AND WE LOVE HATE??? TOMORROWS CANCELLED? KEEP WRITING PLEASE U R GOOD!!!!
On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 1:24 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
The poem is suppose to be why i hate war as well. It IS rather stupid, but people are not far enough in the evolutionary process to stop it.
On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 12:09 PM, Deathdemon said:
i hate war, but i like the poem ^^)