You Can Do Anything

Fri, May 11, 2012 at 9:36 PM By: let1rock1liv1forever

Feedback and criticism is appreciated, that's how i get better :) And this poem is a little cheesy but, whatever :P

As i stare into your eyes

I see,

Something more of what you've become

Something more that you can do

Yet you chose not to?


You could save the world,

Like you have saved me

Yet you chose not to

Why?


You could better this world

Better everyone's lives

Yet you sit there and believe someones lies

Saying you're worthless,

Saying you're heartless

Well they are wrong


If you were worthless you wouldn't be here

If you were heartless I wouldn't be here

You saved me,

And if you just believed it,

You could do anything

  1. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Thu, May 31, 2012 at 2:34 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Thank you :)

  2. MontezCrow avatar

    On Wed, May 30, 2012 at 12:19 AM, MontezCrow said:

    Wow, this is pretty good! One of your best IMO!

  3. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Sun, May 13, 2012 at 7:10 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Why thank you! :)

  4. wiccanlord avatar

    On Sat, May 12, 2012 at 12:34 PM, wiccanlord said:

    have to say i like it,

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