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You Can Do Anything
Feedback and criticism is appreciated, that's how i get better :) And this poem is a little cheesy but, whatever :P
As i stare into your eyes
I see,
Something more of what you've become
Something more that you can do
Yet you chose not to?
You could save the world,
Like you have saved me
Yet you chose not to
Why?
You could better this world
Better everyone's lives
Yet you sit there and believe someones lies
Saying you're worthless,
Saying you're heartless
Well they are wrong
If you were worthless you wouldn't be here
If you were heartless I wouldn't be here
You saved me,
And if you just believed it,
You could do anything
Comments
On Thu, May 31, 2012 at 2:34 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
Thank you :)
On Wed, May 30, 2012 at 12:19 AM, MontezCrow said:
Wow, this is pretty good! One of your best IMO!
On Sun, May 13, 2012 at 7:10 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
Why thank you! :)
On Sat, May 12, 2012 at 12:34 PM, wiccanlord said:
have to say i like it,