Sat, May 5, 2012 at 10:10 PM By: let1rock1liv1forever

I am aware of how stupid this poem is, it just wouldn't come out very good. But your comments and feedback are still appreciated.

Maybe i'm dying on the inside
Maybe i'm sick
Maybe ill kill myself
Maybe its all a trick

Maybe on the inside i'm rotting
But on the outside ill still be smiling
Ill still be happy
Or so you think

On the inside i could be dying
But on the outside ill seem like i'm flying

I could be going through hell,
Yet still i will yell~
Joyous things and make you think
That i am just fine with thyself

Tonight i might cry
But tomorrow ill happily say hi
This might be horrible
But think about it~

Would you rather me sad
And never be glad?
Always cry,
And meanly say goodbye?

I do this because i love you
And you,
And you.

So dont hate me because all i will say~
Is to hell with you

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