What's Wrong With Me?

Tue, May 1, 2012 at 5:47 PM By: let1rock1liv1forever

This poem doesn't have any improvement or anything, i pretty much just wrote it lol


What's wrong with me?
Nothing, you say

What's wrong with me?
Am i a victim this day?

What's wrong with me?
All anyone says is
That ill find it someday

What's wrong with me?
Am i evil?
Am i a fright?
Are you worried that ill kill?

Why must i wait~
In this horrible place
And wait for nothing
Yet i will not slow my pace

I'm screaming~
But no one is hearing

I'm suffering~
But you can't see my pain

I'm dying~
But i am alive

I'm trying~
But its all in vain

  1. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 8:07 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Aww thanks

  2. bayley avatar

    On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 10:08 AM, bayley said:

    You seriously need to publish your stuff. ITS ALL SO GOOD!

  3. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 5:32 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    Why thank you :)

  4. Wind Dancer avatar

    On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 7:22 PM, Wind Dancer said:

    Excellent! Has rhythm, very easy to follow, and so true!

  5. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 4:31 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    I wont :D and thank you :)

  6. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 4:29 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    why thank you :)

  7. Big Shark avatar

    On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 12:17 PM, Big Shark said:

    Nicely done :P

  8. faceless2nameless avatar

    On Tue, May 1, 2012 at 7:53 PM, faceless2nameless said:

    fuck.. i fucken loved it! :D you have some true skills.. don let them go to waste :)

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