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What's Wrong With Me?
This poem doesn't have any improvement or anything, i pretty much just wrote it lol
What's wrong with me?
Nothing, you say
What's wrong with me?
Am i a victim this day?
What's wrong with me?
All anyone says is
That ill find it someday
What's wrong with me?
Am i evil?
Am i a fright?
Are you worried that ill kill?
Why must i wait~
In this horrible place
And wait for nothing
Yet i will not slow my pace
I'm screaming~
But no one is hearing
I'm suffering~
But you can't see my pain
I'm dying~
But i am alive
I'm trying~
But its all in vain
Comments
On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 8:07 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
Aww thanks
On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 10:08 AM, bayley said:
You seriously need to publish your stuff. ITS ALL SO GOOD!
On Thu, May 3, 2012 at 5:32 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
Why thank you :)
On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 4:31 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
I wont :D and thank you :)
On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 4:29 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
why thank you :)
On Wed, May 2, 2012 at 12:17 PM, Big Shark said:
Nicely done :P
On Tue, May 1, 2012 at 7:53 PM, faceless2nameless said:
fuck.. i fucken loved it! :D you have some true skills.. don let them go to waste :)