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Only person with a brain
Am I the only damn person with a brain?
I know everybody's living but its all in vain
I know everybody's living but there putting a strain
In this world
To the people
I swear i'm the only one with a brain!
Everyone's
Killing
Killing
Without a second thought
If i don't
Hurry
Hurry
I'm afraid ill get caught
I'm afraid ill be taught
All these
Stupid
Stupid
Goddamn ways
I know i'm living
I know i'm living with a brain
But there all
Living
Living
In such goddamn vain
What happened to justice?
What happened to others first?
If i don't
Hurry
Hurry
They'll kill me to control there thirst
I'm dieing
You're dieing
All the good ones are gone
Everyone else, well they are all one
One to fear
One's to near
Don't pray
Don't shout
Do something, now
Do it yourself
Do it, or else
We will all die
Comments
On Sun, Apr 22, 2012 at 4:00 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
i got a cupple lines in my head after listening to eyeless by slipkont then i just finished it in a cupple of minuets. But i did revise it a little when i posted it, but not much. Also my other poem was my first getting out of writers block~ therefor not very good lol
On Sun, Apr 22, 2012 at 12:13 PM, Big Shark said:
Very good! A bit more poetic I think then your last piece, but I honestly tend to like the poetic things a bit more! How long did you work on this, did it just come naturally? I had a hard time writing any lyrics this serious because I have a difficult time describing how I feel, so I'm just wondering if you find it easier than I do :P