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As i set fire to the rain
Burning
screaming
see my pain?
feel it
touch it
go be vain
No rain
i will set fire to it
let it pour flames
not water
scream
as you indulge
with the rain
Swollow it
swollow it
feel my pain
As i set fire to the rain
burn
burn
dont extinguish
burn
Up in flames
down with your happiness
up with my revenge
cringe with sadness
in the light of my rain
which isnt very far
anyway
Please give me your feedback! thats how i get better :)
Comments
On Wed, Feb 15, 2012 at 7:50 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
lol im not a fan on reading much poetry eather (except for sometimes), but i LOVE to write it
On Wed, Feb 15, 2012 at 6:22 PM, cdu said:
Cool, I don't usually like poetry.
On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 7:44 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
thank you so much! ill be sure and try to post every weekend, it might not happen but ill try! :)
and again, thank you SOOOO much for your words!
there very inspireing :)
On Mon, Feb 13, 2012 at 1:09 PM, fearisaplacetolive said:
I love your poems, your very good and you dont need to do better because you are already very good, it's a safe way to let out what is in on the inside. KEEP IT UP AND I WILL KEEP READING THEM.
On Sat, Feb 11, 2012 at 9:05 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:
thank you so much! im trying to get them published and see if i can become a writer for a magazine or something.
no luck so far but im going to try harder.
i wasnt very sure if i was that good but all the random people on the internet think so so imma give it a try :)
On Sat, Feb 11, 2012 at 12:44 AM, The Children Of KoRn said:
You realy are a great poem writer.