As i set fire to the rain

Thu, Feb 9, 2012 at 10:31 AM By: let1rock1liv1forever



see my pain?

feel it

touch it

go be vain

No rain

i will set fire to it

let it pour flames

not water


as you indulge

with the rain

Swollow it

swollow it

feel my pain

As i set fire to the rain



dont extinguish


Up in flames

down with your happiness

up with my revenge

cringe with sadness

in the light of my rain

which isnt very far


Please give me your feedback! thats how i get better :)

  1. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Wed, Feb 15, 2012 at 7:50 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    lol im not a fan on reading much poetry eather (except for sometimes), but i LOVE to write it

  2. cdu avatar

    On Wed, Feb 15, 2012 at 6:22 PM, cdu said:

    Cool, I don't usually like poetry.

  3. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Tue, Feb 14, 2012 at 7:44 PM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    thank you so much! ill be sure and try to post every weekend, it might not happen but ill try! :)
    and again, thank you SOOOO much for your words!
    there very inspireing :)

  4. fearisaplacetolive avatar

    On Mon, Feb 13, 2012 at 1:09 PM, fearisaplacetolive said:

    I love your poems, your very good and you dont need to do better because you are already very good, it's a safe way to let out what is in on the inside. KEEP IT UP AND I WILL KEEP READING THEM.

  5. let1rock1liv1forever avatar

    On Sat, Feb 11, 2012 at 9:05 AM, let1rock1liv1forever said:

    thank you so much! im trying to get them published and see if i can become a writer for a magazine or something.
    no luck so far but im going to try harder.
    i wasnt very sure if i was that good but all the random people on the internet think so so imma give it a try :)

  6. The Children Of KoRn avatar

    On Sat, Feb 11, 2012 at 12:44 AM, The Children Of KoRn said:

    You realy are a great poem writer.

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