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SO this is one of my poems (its untitled so far) Its also on my About Me thing on my profile:
Wether I laugh, wether I smile,
You should know, that on the inside,
I face a hard trial.
In music, my emotions can confide.
Inside, a hurt child,
Yet on the outside,
I make my hurt seem mild.
If I've told you, that I am fine, then
I've lied.
Tied down by the lies that so many have
told me,
Screaming silently.
Hearing thoughts and heartache of another,
Makes it known to my eyes that, out there,
there are others.
Feeling certain now,
knowing, one day, I can feel normal, somehow
All because the sounds of another,
Makes it known to me that out there,
there are others,
Who've faced the same trials,
Yet have now walked miles.
On the inside,
A hurt child,
Now answers I know I can find,
Then a life I can start creating with the
tiles, of truth that I have found.
No longer am I gagged and bound!
A life I can now start,
And hope it does not come apart.
Let me know what you think! Its appreciated!!!










Comments
On Mon, Jul 11, 2011 at 4:08 PM, Xusi said:
"If I've told you, that I am fine, then I've lied."
LOVE that line!
Beautiful poem, beautiful expression (X)
On Mon, Jul 11, 2011 at 3:10 PM, Tammie said:
This is really good! Reminds me of my daughter.